Uncanny In The Moving Finger

Examine the elements of “uncanny”in The Moving Finger Finger. How can you justify the fates of  Mr Grancy and Claydon. 

“The Moving Finger” is a psychological thriller written by prolific American novelist Edith Wharton. It revolves around the themes of loneliness and isolation embedded into the life of the male protagonist of the play accompanied by the combining effects of control and rivalry which results in a power struggle for love exhibited by the two male characters of the plot, arising from their dependence on a female. 

The preternatural and unsettling plot is characterised by the characters feelings and the psychological effect it creates on their lives.  Both Mr Grancy and Claydon are portrayed to be deeply in love with the late second Mrs. Grancy to an extent that brings about the themes of rivalry in the plot. Both of them feel like they need her presence in their life to sustain themselves. This highlights the uncanny theme in the fact that although it was stereotypical during that day and age that women were depended on men for mostly everything, it was reversed herein where both males were attracted and dependent on the beautiful Mrs. Grancy. Ralph Grancy, especially is depicted to be of a controlling nature and wants to control his wife even after her death. This is evident in his request to Claydon to repaint the portrait of Mrs. Grancy in order to be able to watch her grow older with him. Wharton characterises Ralph as a man who is unable to cope with his life with no support and cannot move on after the death of his second wife. However, he. Is simultaneously controlled by his wives. This is underscored by Whatron in the play wherein Mr. Grancy refuses to divorce his first wife despite his marriage not exactly being “successful”. 

The undercurrent of tension between the males of the short story is accenuated by the possibility of an affair between Claydon and the second Mrs. Grancy. This reinstates the theme of uncanny as it emphasises the theme of rivalry present in the mind of Clayton for Mr. Grancy. The symbolism of the potrait suggests the love and obsession both Mr. Grancy and Clayton have for Mrs. Grancy. There is also some symbolism reflected in the fact that Ralph Grancy had married twice – it highlights his need to feel connected with someone. This throws light upon the theme of uncanny further as it depicts both the characters to have similar tastes in women and being equally dependent on one woman and yet simultaneously competitor’s for her love. 

Wharton makes use of the creative theme of stereotypes to create the effect of uncanny in the work. Both Mr. Grancy and Claydon objectify Mrs. Grancy and they do not treat Mrs. Gracy as a woman who deserves respect. However, this is contrasted with the fact that both the men are completely and deeply in love with Mrs. Grancy and they are completely dependent on her for the same reasons. 

The Bath Complete Analysis

THE BATH by Aditi Prasad

Summary: the story’s about the tyranny of ageing and the terror that a failing body wrecks on the elderly. The loss of independence and her laborious journey to her late husband’s grave on his seventeenth death anniversary.

Sr no.PointsAnalysis Explanation Evidence and Device

Context (time and historic context)21st Century In New Zealand-The story taking place in the modern world makes it more impactful on readers as it may resonate with them better. -In New Zealand the seasons are temporal and harsh thus the location allows the author to write the added difficulties of older people living alone.

Setting Time settingFriday AfternoonBath in the eveningSame day (elongated time of bath – event of the day) Winter seasonPlace setting HomeBathroom CemeteryReported settingClothes hanging areaKitchenAfternoon she prepared ahead for the visit by going out and buying cut flowers. The use of o many commas, asyndeton highlights how labouring and tiring the task due to her old age.-Bath that evening was imperative, crucial, as many important events like this “demanded” it. Shows reluctance but begrudging acceptance of the fact.There is also an order, predictability thus of all preparations to events, which is constant and stable giving the old women a sense of control. -Same day this highlights the arduous nature of the bath and how just this simple act takes up a majority of her day.-Winter connotes that the chill adds an extra layer of challenge in the old lady’s visits to graveyard. 
Home; the place is manag-
-”daffodils, anemones, a few twigs of a red-leaved shrub, wrapped in mauvewaxed paper, for saturday was the seventeenth anniversary of her husbands death”-“visits to the century, the doctor, and to relatives, to stay, always demanded a bath.”

CharactersOld woman  Reported minor characters:Deceased parentsDeceased husband Niece


Relationships : with no living things then people. Highlights loneliness and isolation.Old woman  and her home Old woman  and the bathtubOld woman  and the cemetery/tombOld woman  and her familyOld woman  and death


conflicts- Old woman  and her body. Old woman  and time. Old woman  and her desire to be respected/have her dignity. Old woman  and loneliness (wants companionship ironically brought out by her sense of piece being in the cemetry)Old women and her immediate family and her neighbours.Time VS Human Body/Strength Life VS Death. Old age VS Self respect 


Themes-Ravaging effects of time.Depreciation of human body with old age.Dependency in old age Loss of control in old age.Loss of identity and self respect.Loneliness in old age Mortality Trepidation that comes with overcoming obstacles in old age Calm in death VS worries in Life.Sympathy evoked towards old people.


Techniques-Irony Death is more welcoming than life Finding peace in a cemetry than in her own home Fear of taking a bath(theme: old age)Dangers of a bathtub(hilarity)Symbols-Bath, Grave
Motif- Bath
Stream of consciousnesses (inner monologue technique)Brings out or heigtens her loneliness, as she has only herself to talk to.
The irony that death is more comforting than life is alarming and readers become sympathetic of the old women who is lonely and suffering.Same pointShe delays the moment she has to take a bath + she delays the moment to get out which was the hardest moment highlighting her fear of struggling and failing. Consequently remaining stuck in the bath.Ironically her worst fear is being stuck in the bath, the hilariously and ludicrously of this idea to a normal being in contrast to the old women magnify how physically weak she is becoming. And how terrifying the thought that her body had become an enemySymbols:the bath in this story is symbolic of death. Many times the old lady has had close calls being stuck or entrapped by death. She fears it and dreads every time she bathes as it symbolic of her struggle with life and against death.The grave is symbolic of
-“she longed to find a place beside the graves, in the soft grass, and fall asleep”

The Stoat Complete Analysis

The Stoat by Aditi Prasad

Summary: 

  • The story takes place near Strandhill, a coastal village in Co. Sligo, Ireland, where a widowed teacher vacations with his son. 
  • When the son is out golfing he stumbles upon a dying rabbit, that had been hunted down by a stoat
  • The stoat lithers away but the boy in an act of mercy kills the rabbit and takes it with him, all the while being followed by the stoat.
  • The boy takes the rabbit to the father whom doubts whether their evening guest Miss McCabe would enjoy the rabbit
  • It then goes into a memory, a flashback as the boy remembers how the father asked for his sons approval to remarry and sent out ads to widowed women who seeked companionship with him. The father, riducled for searching still had many people replying to the ad.
  • During this time the son had gotten closer to the uncle and was planning to live with him instead of the father as he found him dull and his uncle’s ideology and moral better.
  • Skipping then to the son and MsMcCabe meeting which despite not going very smoothly, ended with the son liking Miss McCabe and approving the marriage- which he claims he would have even if he had not liked her
  • Miss McCabe had rheumatism and the sons father needed a walking stick. Though old they seeked companionship from another but that very next day, after the dinner they had with the rabbit, Miss McCabe had a mild heat attack in the salt baths.
  • The father, now revealed to be an escapist just like his son, immediately packs his things to leave a he doesnt want to suffer the pain and loss of lossing another women in his life. The son wanting to leave his boring life with his father takes the chance to leave for his uncle’s.
  • The story ends with a passage how parenting is a complicated activity and in a way suggests the father in the story had come short in teaching his son to actively and properly pursue the challenges and pain in life.
  • In the end the stoat killing the rabbit is an allegory of life. The stoat is death, and the rabbit is the people. You can try to escape death but it will continue to pursue you until there is no other end then death.

Stoat-a small carnivorous weasel

  • Inhumanity of taking life
    • Sparse physical description of the student serves to magnify the act of the killing by drawing all the attention to it. He was simply a “long-legged student in a turtleneck” 
    • The cruelty, indifference, lack of remorse, desensitisation and the almost sadistic pleasure of taking the little rabbits life are highlighted by the grotesque images having seemingly no effect on the boy. The poor rabbit was in “pure terror” and his “body (was) trembling in a rigidity off terror” “heat hammer(ing)” yet the boy simply “killed it with one stroke”- no remorse or compassion in his actions.
    • The contrast of the emotions felt by the rabbit and the man, or the lack of it, this juxtaposition once again brings out the cruelty of the killing act and also the pain the rabbit suffers. No internal dialouges are given of the man but the readers can easily decipher the terrorised and traumatised emotions and thoughts of the rabbit. Thus ironically it is the human that is emotionless, giving the rabbit a human-like quality. This highlight further the theme of inhumanity of the life taking.
    • The boy being more concerned with the game the life he took shows how to him it was an insignificant death. Adds on to the idea he has no humanity when rather being saddened by the death of the rabbit he was saddened over the fact that the killing had made him “lose his concentration” of the game.
    • Relates to uncles philosophy of taking for yourself, being selfish to fulfill your own desires. It is instinctive and it is raw. Just like the stoat taking the life. It is very primitive and not like the higher thinking. Its unhumane. “Life has no purpose other than to reproduce itself”
  • Stoat
    • “Slithered like a snake” – it has sneaky, cunning, slithery connotations. Reminds reader of the tale of Adam and Eve and their sly encounter with the snake. Biblical connotation emphasizes the manipulation of the human.  A Simile is used here
    • It feels ownership to the prey as it continued to “(follow) the rabbit still” and even “twice glimpsed the stoat behind him.” The primitive scene of prey vs predator is further emphasized by the jungle setting of the story. 
    • The stoat acts as a leitmotif for death. The stoat “marks down” his prey and like death it is unescapable.
  • Prey and Predator or Food chain
    • The intense detailed description- aural, visual, tactile images- portraying sorrow and anguish bring out the relations. Of the chase.
    • The act of the human stealing the prey portrays the human supremacy as at the top of the food chain. – “He took the rabbit down with him”
    • The wildness of the setting compliments the theme of the food chain hierarchy in the wild. “Long grass” , “water from the inlet”, “Calm sea” , “couarse tussocks” , “green to the tee”
  • Animalistic nature of events
    • The wildness of the setting compliments the theme of the food chain hierarchy in the wild and in a strange way emphasizes the savagery and brazenness of the attack
    • The stouts possessiveness of the prey shows primitiveness of the situation. “Would not be deflected” shows how focused the stout was. “Marked down” his prey.
    • The stout  plays around with its prey this is cruel and highlights the inevitability of the rabbits death. Making its attempts to survive bleak, it’s almost like the rabbit understands this too as it stops running and simply awaits its death.
    • The sentence length of the chase brings out the inevitability of the death. Although the chase was long (like the sentence) the end was short for the rabbit, too short.  
    • The stout casual and sadistically playful attitude bring out the inevitability of its death due to the juxtaposition of the animals attitudes to imminent death.
    • The parallel of the deaths of human and the rabbit – the stoat being a motif for death – proves death is the only constant, this primal and raw insight thus has an animalistic undercurrent bringing out this prevelant theme.
  • Old Age and importance of companionship 
  1. The father yearns for a connection with his son, and unsuccessful he moves on to look in the ‘newspaper’ for a women to spend his last years with.
  2. “hiding behind the copy” wants to hide from societies glare. He’s self conscious 
  3. It’s hard to find someone he likes “both personality and appearance” 
  4. Formal language “applicant” “interviewing” brings out emotionlessness of marriage.
  5. The uncle realises that life is monotonous and repetitive. That if you don’t do what you love than it isn’t worth it. Thus, though uncle is wise he doesn’t empathise with his brother over him trying to find companionship and some happiness with someone else.  “life seems to have no purpose… and not be in error” We see that uncle feels to live this life as fulfilling your life and happiness. This is selfish. Thus the strained relationship between son and father helps him, it’s good for him. 
  • Uncle
    • Common populist who sees an old man looking for a companion as funny. He doesn’t feel empathy for his brother. He mocks him for it
    • The relationship is strained with brother which probably pushed the father to look for someone. The fathers familial ties are broken.
    • Paradox brings out the irony of people not thinking that old people are lonely and are looking for companionship. As people actually replies to the newspaper. It’s ludicrous he got replies at all. 
    • Setting when the two go for a “long walk” “after dinner” – here of beautiful and soft nature show the nature of the relationship between son and uncle. Blossoming gently but clearly.
    • The fact that the son chooses to become a doctor like his surgeon uncle, going against his fathers wishes of becoming a banker shows their increasing closesness and also the reason of the distance the father has with his uncle.

Uncle is boastful, arrogant- “bigwig”

He doesn’t try to make himself bigger and move onto a new city to be bigger rather than in the “small town”

  • Competition 

There is a childish rivalry between father and uncle. There is competition between them over the favour of the son.

Stoat against the human.

There is no compromising by either side. 

  • Father and son

Can’t relate together cause son is pragmatic but father is sentimental – Seen when his father talks about the cook.

Doesn’t want to get into this emotional conversation with him. 

“unconscious” described the father – the son – unaware, irrationality, emotional.

“anxious for his approval” father cares what son thinks. Wants him to like and be part of the family. 

Embarrassed of fathers facade with the woman and he doesn’t care how it would impact him he just wants be distanced from this uncomfortable position. 

Elipses ‘…’ shows hesitation of the father he desperately want his approval.

“Complicated activity” – by recalling the uncles words indicates the boy blames the father for how he is now. Emotionally repressive and escapist of all and any situations that make him uncomfortable.

  • Miss McCabe 

Dull, ordinary, not flashy, simple, sickly

That’s why she sees something in the father they both aren’t gaudy 

Has rheumatism

  • Escapist 
    • The Son is an escapist and so is the father. “The stoat the father had glimpsed in Miss McCabe’s hotel room” – death/suffering – “he was running” away from. This can be paralleled with the rabbit and the stoat. The rabbit were the humans, the old people, whom were trying to outrun death, the stoat.  By ending the story with the same excert that had described the long-winded chase and the agonising death of the rabbit the author highlights the fact that death is constant and the only inevitable end for all living beings. Giving this story a disturbing and existential moral.
    • “They were all running” – the son is about to become a fully qualified doctor and is now going to move out from his father and live independently thus the end of their relationship. The son longs for the end of this relationhip because despite feeling “guilty” about it, the father bores him.thus no matter how long we may prolong it relationhips run its course and must end eventually at some point.

The Lemon Orchard Comprehensive Analysis

Lemon Orchard

Summary:The Lemon Orchard by Alex la Guma is a short story set during the apartheid to show the harshness and cruelty of racism. This story is about a black man being captured and hidden in the lemon orchard by five white men. The reason for this violence is described to be because the black teacher had been “cheeky”, possibly just politely argumentative with the minister of the church of that area. Now he is going to suffer.

CharactersLanguage PointersEvidence
Black Man – captorPreposition – but – singles outAdjective – only – describes the captiveAdjective – loose / raincoat – flimsy and thinHarsh verb, imperative – highlights his strong moralityPreposition – behind – highlights vulnerabilityAdverb – forcefully, hard – reluctance portrayed
Began – past tense of verb begin – suspense as action goes onDeterminer – no – highlights determination and his strengthMixture – noun – encompassing his feelingsJuxtaposes his dignified personality – hubris
“All of the men but one wore thick clothes”“Only one not warmly dressed”“Loose raincoat”“fear was mixed with stubborness which forbade him from answering”“Wrist tied behind him”“Clenched his teeth”“Mistaken for cowardice”“Sweat began to form”
“He had no wish to die”
“Mixture of dignity and contempt”“prisoner”
Leader Adjective – bigAdjective – shooting – gives purposeAdjective – already loaded – violence to comeTrepidation and fear is aroused – muzzle – point blank from the captive Metaphor – eyes are windows to the soul – cleverly establishes there is not kindness in his being“Big man”“Old shooting jacket”“Loaded shotgun”“Muzzle of the gun down” his back
“Eyes were hard and blue like two frozen lakes
Other captors (TOTAL 5)Past participle – verb – marked Outnumbered – indicated by ‘fifth’Adverb – highlights trepidationNoun – weapon – whipAdjective connotes anger and uncontrolled furyVerb shoot – imminent danger – noun anger highlights the uncontrolled and unpredictably dangerous nature of the men“Ridged foot prints”“Fifth man of the party”“Nervously – don’t want any murder”“Carried sjambok”“Clenched fists”“Would shoot him in anger”

ThemeLanguage AnalysisEvidence
RacismSimile – black connotes uncleanlinessVerb “to damn” verdomte / offensive term Offensive term of the timeAdverb – in addition to – degrading on raceContradicting – implying he is educated but not worthy of being respected on his skin colorOxymoronDeterminer – no / conjuction – while – highlights this is a lifelong problem in that societyNative term – oppressing the black man as he is raising issuesIronic – means friend but he hits the man followingIn this case adjective hotnot is first – he’s derogatory addressed then by noun bastard. Implying he is a bastard because of his coloured skinMocking him by calling him “lighting” translated because he is strongly opinionatedJuxtaposing ideasVery naive and immature characterisation – highlights the white men’s uneducation “Black as a kaffir’s soul here at the back”“Verdomte hotnot“Hotnot”“He is dumb also”“Slim hotnot”
“Educated bushmen”“No hotnot will be cheeky to a white man while i live” “Demand respect from donders
“Jong”“Hotnot bastard”

“Bliksem”
“Educated hottentots”“Black englishmen”
DiscriminationVeiled in anonymityMetaphor for the protest of colored man, stopped when the white men approached.Imperative verb – demandedConnotes that he is held him by forceThreatening – contraction won’t // we – plural highlights how is outnumbered and at their mercySegregating, pressuring him to leaveWorth is lessened – noun dignity“Could not be seen in the dark”“Crickets stopped their small noises”
“Darkness demanded silence”“Prisoner”“He won’t demand damages when we’re done with him”“Go and live in the city”Compromised the “dignity of the volk”
CowardiceDefinitive auxiliary verb not – anonymity is confirmedAdverb – silently The noun mans face – was – adjective invisibleTook the man when was unguarded in the dead of the nightdefenceless man is being threatened – harshness and the threat evokes sympathy and fury from readers“They could not be seen in the dark”“Called softly” – leader“Man’s face was invisible”“Taken him from his lodgings” in his “pjs”
“Shoot a hole through your spine”  
Violence to comeThreatening – contraction won’t // we – plural highlights how is outnumbered and at their mercyClung – adverb desperately to hope – moon symbolic of hopeAngled – sharp – adjectiveVisual image – sharp – knifes – sjambokTactile image and auditory image – screams from whips are foreshadowedAdjective – trembling rapidly – pain, sufferance“He won’t demand damages” after “we’re done with him”“Moonlight clung to leaves”
“Angled branches”“Tips and edges”“Solid strips of high- pitched sounds”
“Quivering shine of scattered quicksilver”

SettingsLanguage Analysis Evidence
The nightNoun  unpleasant feeling of coldness in the atmosphereAdjective – describes moons state – blind eye to racism / allegory for society, pure and white hidden behind dirty woolCourched – verb – vulnerable, defensive, acceptingGradual violence increasing – verb – unpleasant“Chill in the air”“Moon was hidden”“Like dirty cotton wool in the sky”“Blackness of the night crouched over”“‘Chill increased”
The OrchardMetaphor for narrow mindedness of the white menOxymoron – nature is conflicted, condemning the men’s actionJuxtaposing the cruelty and violence with auditory image of pleasing lemon scentsAuditory imageKinesthetic and auditory image of whip and screamsSharp auditory smell evoked – hint escalated violence comingCruel act in a auditorily calm and pleasing area in a garden“Two long, regular row of trees”“Harsh whispering” of the leaves“Inconsistent  with the pleasant scent of the lemons”“Creek-creek-creek of the crickets”“Solid strips of high-pitched sound”“Juice crushed from them”“Wide gap” with “fragrant growth”
Year of writingThe allegory here is that the leaders description represents a whole country, a nation that has been deeply corrupted by racism. The visual metaphors bring this out.“Tiny wrinkle and deep creases”“Red-clay complexion of his face”“Like the myriad of lines ‘’ ‘’ on a map”“Sharp range and peaks of his chin and cheekbones” 

On Her Knees Comprehensive Analysis

On Her Knees by Aditi Prasad

Summary: On Her Knees is a story narrated by Victor, a son who attends college to study law, and his mother who is a cleaner on about the last clean of the house of a lady who had accused the mother Carol Lang of stealing a pair of silver earrings. The story ends with the pair finding the earrings hidden between some silvery chocolate wrappers. As it turns out the earrings were not very precious or valuable and was an hyperbolic excuse by the homeowner to fire Carol and attempt to chip down her hourly rate.

PointsAnalysis and explanationEvidence
Characters- OverviewCarol LangVictor LangCarol Lang is an independent, divorced, honest and hard working lady whom tirelessly works as a house cleaner in wealthy, high socioeconomic homes to support her son through law school.Victor Lang is the cynical, suspicious, clever and loyal son of Carol Lang. Throughout the story he is very loyal to his mother and is a very proud person. He cannot accept the injustice against his mother.
ThemesPride
Dignity
Independence
Honesty
Struggle
Class
Revenge
Injustice
Pride is shown in many ways-Victor’s mother is a proud and dignified woman. Despite the fact that she is forced to clean other people’s houses in order to make a living she never allows this to get the better of her and takes pride in her work, especially her standard of conduct. She took pride in the quality of her work and despite cleaning other people’s floors she maintained a dignity and a high standard for herself. This is done by Winton to heighten our respect for the mother and in turn heighten the feeling of unjustness and anger when she is helpless to prove her honour due to class gap, as she is simply doing the best she can.-Carol is prideful that he can support her son independently without him having to work, allowing him to focus on his studies.
PERSONAL PRIDE is importantly highlighted in the last few dialogues of the story, as it arouses happiness at Carol’s ability to persevere and maintain her sense of self-pride and dignity. Despite being wronged and faulted towards. 
Struggle is portrayed by the obstacles the Lang’s had to face. Though they’ve “had a grim few years”in  life they remain undefeated. -Despite having a “come-down” from her last job she ensures that her son does not suffer academically due to their financial instability, this highlights the immense struggle he has gone through to provide her son the best of opportunities. This raises the respect and sympathy for her in the readers eyes. Additionally so as she had succeeded to send him to law school whims rich students house she happens to clean in!- Carol has suffered her a divorce and was forced into becoming a breadmaker of her little family after her husband left her,althoughwhile burdening them with a debt. Her constant perseverance through the many hurdles in her life arouses admiration and respect from readers, especially in the conclusion of the story serves to heighten thefeelings of injustice done to such a noble soul.
Carol is a dignified woman despite her work occupation.-She is not ashamed of her work and does not bow down to the pressure of “slob(by) householders” who tried to exploit her and “extort more work for their money”. This shows readers he know her worth and thus we see her as a strong, persevering and honourable character.
-Her dignity is also portrayed by her precise driving. She is rule-abiding and very “precise” as if given no one a doubt or a reason to criticize her in any way. 

-Her honest and reliable character as a worker is highlighted by the fact that she has only ever been fired from a job once, and that to over something measly and inadmissible. -The mother’s honest character is also proved by her drive to still do a good and honest job to prove to the householder that she is a hard worker and not guilty of the accusations. Carol does not intend to do an incompetent job and this augment the admiration and likability of the character.-her urging he son not to be intrusive and vengeful shows her honest character as well.Independence is portrayed by the fact that Victor’s mother is her own boss. Victor might be unhappy that his mother is a cleaner but she does have her own independence and can provide for her family like putting her son through law school or buying a car. OR their huge house which has a verandah. -The fact that they haggle with Victor’s mother over the rate she should be paid is important as it is placing a spotlight on those who belong to the middle and upper classes. -Suggesting that those who are wealthy and of a class higher than Victor’s mother may be mean and blinded by self-importance. Viewing Victor’s mother as being beneath them. This raises our resentment for the employee and our sympathy and respect for Carol Lang. – Suggest that the upper class demean and discriminate the lower class by pretending not to be bothered by the fact that strangers would come and clean their home. Portrays them as less dignified and self-respecting as the upper class would think themselves to be.-The smell of the higher-end neighbourhood highlights the class divide between Victor’s class and the householder-The excessitivity of the homes decorating and furnishing highlights the difference in the classes. They had many different wines, and different condiments which amused the Lang’s.- The great Persian cat makes people think of royalty and high-class due to the relation to it to persian carpets and other novel products from the perian. It act as an emblem of one’s status and is not very practical as the cats just shed everywhere and dirty the place. Thus highlight the difference in class again between the Lang’s and the householder.Injustice is interconnected with other themes in this story, especially class. Neither Victor nor his mother have anybody else to cushion the blows that life might throw at them. Unlike those who own the houses that Victor’s mother cleans. Not only is Winton giving the reader a strong female character but he also manages to highlight the plight of those who are working class. Particularly the obstacles they can face when engaging with the middle or upper classes. Individuals who appear to be driven by a belief that they are better than others. -despite working so hard, “shining with sweat” as she admits that even if she goes to the police about being unfairly discriminated to, she will not attain justice as the one thing she has, “her good name” will be tarnished by “the talk” that will arise from the drama. She’d “lose the rest of (her jobs) and was simply “stuffed” and helpless. All they could do was “grin and bear it” thi highlights the struggle and the plights of the working class.-This is starkly portrayed in the end when despite finding the earring in the home itself she cannot prove her innocence to the employer. As it is her word against the other. This injustice shows class struggle and the unfairity created around the fact that she is not in the same class as the lady. How severe the obstacles are for those who are working class are highlighted by despite the earrings being found and despite Victor’s wishes to report the matter to the police. Victor’s mother knows that she will not be believed by either the police or the woman whose flat she is cleaning. This shows individuals are usually not treated equally due to their socioeconomic status which though unfair is a sad reality. The helplessness heightens pathos of the last scene. Injustice to Carol is done by the measly basis of her termination. The earrings were definitely not worth over five hundred dollars, and it was all “fake outrage” that they had to suffer for. And in the end despite having a flash hope for their innocence it was quickly erased by the sad reality of the class discrimination that they will face against other people, who will doubt their story more than the house holders. -The scene is made far sadder by Victor despite his education, being a lawyer, is powerless to help his mother. 
Themes
Pride
– In her work: “stiff-necked working class pride” //“stickler for order” //“Carol Lang went through a house like a dose of salts” – idiom; fast and efficient // “She earned a reputation” // “She became the domestic benchmark” // “She was proud of her good name”
In her ability to provide for her son: she never asked for the help and never “said a word” should he not accompany her // she never “needed his help” “it’s company” that she wanted.
LAST SCENE: What about the money? Im worth more.  You’re not taking it?  No.” // “I smiled and shook my head” – he is approving but amused by her honour.
Struggle:SHIFTING PROFESSION: “the study- is too important” // she never asked for the help and never “said a word” should he not accompany her // “When did I ever ask you to come”// “viens stood out on her calf” // “So old”//“Thighs white and dimpled” // “it was a come-down from her previous job” // “all she could get”-ABANDONED BY HUSBAND: “old man shot through” // “pay off his debt” // “old man bolted”   Dignity:
-IN HER WORK: “More honour in scrubbing other people’ floors than having strangers scrub your own” // would not chip down her rate and thus “maintained her dignity and her hourly rate” // “she left jobs, she did not lose them” //  “Her loss – she wont find anyone better than me” // “Not even half as good as you. Not a chance”
-“Silly, dignified angel” // “Mask of composure” // “Caution” // “Changing lanes with excruciating precision”
-Her dignified nature is also highlighted by her “scrubbing and bleaching her tennis shoes every week to keep them looking new” She gives no one any doubt in her worth by displaying herself in a clean and respectable manner at all times.
Honesty:
-HER CHARACTER: “Discreet and deadly honest” // “only ever sacked the once” // “after years of faultless service” she was “terminated” with “no discussion” // “inspect it like a sergeant-major at barracks inspection” – shows her good and honest work //  –HER CONSCIOUS NOT TO BECOME VENGEFUL: “Toughest four hours she’d ever put in” // “We’ll show her – by “clean(ing) that flat within an inch of it life” // “Wouldn’t give the satisfaction” by using her cleaning materials or “us(ing) her car space”- NOT TO BE INTRUSIVE: “No snooping, not even today” // “don’t be a stickybeak” Independence: “corolla” // “verandah”
Class
-CLASS GAP:“Bragged about her” // “passed her around like a hot tip” // “took her for granted” // “patronising notes” // “worst payers and the biggest snobs” // Even though she is losing a job she can still easily “fill a dance card in this business” – ironically use uperclasses archaic term to compare to her waitlist of cleaning jobs she has // “Silence is their idea of an apology. It’s how they are brought up.” // “think most highly of themselves” // “worth twice what those silvertails paid her” // 
DIMMING THE IDEA OF STRANGERS CLEANING YOUR HOUSE:“Some kind of sleepwalker” // “blind””incurious “too stupid to notice intimate things about your life” “a a kind of annihilating self-assurance” // “sets of erotica” // 
SMELL OF THE NEIGHBOURHOOD:It “constant brothy stank” of “old money, of posh schools and yacht clubs” this shows privilege.  // Also Law which he studies. “Men who owned the city cause of it” hints at the end when despite compelling evidence the Lang’s are helpless and powerless against combating the householders word and would be more damaged than her should they confront her of her carelessness. Solely because of the class division. This highlights the unjust in the world.
-EXCESTIVITY OF THE HOME DECOR:Huge American thing with two doors and an icemaker” // “both agreed that nobody who cleaned their own place would bother keeping such junk” – regarding the trinklet they harboured // “sulking great Persians” 
Injustice:
Upper-class think highly of themselves: “hand on her heart” Carol is insulted by the probably “patronising note she was given // putting it away “too quickly” hints at the demeaning words on that note. 
DESPITE BEING INNOCENT SHE CANNOT WIN:                         “Shining with sweat” //  “i’d lose the rest of my jobs” // “stuffed” // “we grin and bear it” // “that’s rich” – the earrings worth was a hyperbole to guilt Carol into giving in and lower down her rate // “forgotten about the earring , “wept them off’ and then lost time, “she didn’t even bother to look” otherwise she would have easily recovered them.  // “Didn’t go to the police because they were cheap” // “furious smile” as this recovering of the earring Still does not prove her innocence // CLASS DIVIDE: “All she has to say is that she made me guilty enough to give them back” // “You can’t fight these people back” again portrays class struggle and arouses unjustness // “perhaps their real value was sentimental” “I heard her blow her nose. I was powerless to defend her. It was the lowest feeling.” 
Relationship betweenVictor and CarolVictor and HouseholderCarol and HouseholderVictor and Carol:Carol loves for her on dearly and does a lot to support him by working as a housecleaner. She doesn’t want to burden him with her struggles thus never asks him to join her to help on her work, tries not to let him see her cry under the lemon tree, only ever asks for his company. Tries to be a good role model for him and not appear weak or struggling.Have conflicting morals and see things differently. Victor is very emotionally charged and as a law student sees things black and white. Unlike Carol whom wants to go back and clean the lady’ housen properly to show what she is missing out on. Victor insist nonetheless that they ought to just give it a “light over”. 
Victor and Householder:Victor unlike his mother is vindictive and vengeful. He feels annoyed and angry for the ill treatment of his mother as portrayed by his disruptive and explosive dialogue in the beginning of the short. How annoyed Victor actually is noticeable by the fact that he puts the earrings in the catbox. Though Victor would like to see his mother do something else rather than cleaning houses he still nonetheless takes great pride in his mother’s dignity and work. He does not like the employer was so crass and rude about her dismissal especially considering that she is innocent. This also highlights the immense respect, love and loyalty between the mother and son.He is usually very resilient and doesn’t “cut corners.” Thus his negligence to do the whole work highlights his resentment to the householder
Victor and Carol:
– “lecture” // “little boy who needed his neck scrubbed” // “too quickly” hid the note so as not to burden him with her sadness and/or hurt.
-It is unusual for them to fight thus this highlights the severity and the offense of the issue- “We argued” “all week.” It was awful” // “fear of driving each other away” they “kept the peace at all costs” but “now could not stop bickering” // “they were still at it”// Victor did a “chassis-bending slam” to the car door to show his disapproval. // “muttered” sarcastically “Go, Mum” Victor and Householder-“They took her for granted” // “It’s outrageous” // “It was unfair, ludicrous, impossible” /// “Chassis-bending slam” // “I felt sick for her” he can’t digest the injustice at play. // “it’s demeaning” “demeaning” – repetition in an emotive voice emphasizes his disapproval and opposition-He loves her thus “felt sick for her” considering how powerless they were, they were being insulted by being brought back again, yet they had to cause of the money. –CATBOX: “snatched them from the quilt” and “chucked them into the cat tray” // “Let her find them there if she cared to look” – he is mocking the fact that she didn’t look very well the first time.-”tipped some litter in and left it at that” // “clawed through her desk” to find something he could validate his malicious version of the householder. //
TechniquesFirst person narrationThe Earrings Glorification in the last few linesNarrated in the first person to heighten the pathos of the reader as they more easily place themselves in the situation. The earrings symbolize the reason for Carol losing her job. It was not a valid reason just like worth of the earrings was exaggerated. This serves to magnify the readers resentment for the householder and making the end even more satisfying as despite Carol’s worth being undermined she and her son walk out with their head held high and proud.The angelic, glorified description of the mothers silhouette leave readers with the last image of Carol Lang being breathtaking, pure, dignified, beautiful and righteous. This gives the story a satisfied ending despite the original conflict remaining unresolved.“In my palm the earrings weighed nothing”// “maybe their true value was sentimental” // “they are cheap” “Stood silhouetted” // “very light of day pouring out through her limbs” // “had my breath back”

IGCSE Physics 0625 Partial Notes

Describe and explain a danger to a driver of not wearing a safety belt during a sudden stop.

  1. (Without seat belt, driver:) e.g. keeps moving (forwards)/ does not stop/ has inertia/ has momentum B1 (Driver) hits steering wheel/windscreen/ dashboard

State an instrument that would be suitable to take measurements of a room?

metre rule, tape measure, (surveyor’s) laser measurer, trundle wheel tape is too vague, accept rule(r)

Why is the true pressure at base point of a cylinder with water different from the value calculated

  1. There is atmospheric pressure acting on it.

Solar Energy

  • Advantages 
    • no polluting gases 
    • Quiet
    • low maintenance 
    • can be placed on roofs 
    • Clean
    • cheap to run 
  • Disadvantages
    • intermittent supply 
    • Unattractive
    • takes up space
    • uses land
    • d.c. output

Define internal energy based on atoms

  • kinetic energy / potential energy / total energy (of atoms / molecules / particles) 
  • Kinetic added to potential energy (of atoms / molecules / particles) 

Explain what is meant by deceleration.

decrease of velocity / speed OR slows / slowing down 

Explain why refractive index does not have a unit

  1.  sines have no unit or 
  2. sines are ratio of two lengths or 
  3. ratio of two speeds (whose units cancel)

How is optic fibres used in communication tecnology?

  • information /message / music/sound / signal / data (encoded as pulses of light) sent
  • light (travels along fibre) or infra-red (radiation) 
  •  light detected (at far end) or message decoded or total internal reflection mentioned 

Precautions while handling radioactive isotopes

• (distance): tongs /manipulator/ centre of cardboard box 

• (absorption): lead gloves / suit/lead glass screen / googles /glasses 

• (time): limit exposure time / keep in box until needed / film badge 

While the boot is in contact with the ball, the ball is no longer spherical. State the word used to describe the energy stored in the ball.

Elastic (energy) OR strain (energy)

Define Weight

(Weight is) force/pull of gravity (acting on an object) 

A 240 V, 60 W lamp is connected to a 240 V supply. The lamp has a constant temperature. State (i) the rate at which the lamp transfers energy to the surroundings

  1. 60W

(ii) the names of the thermal processes by which the lamp transfers energy to the surroundings.

  1. Radiation and convection

Explain what the maximum temperature here is:

  • Radiation mentioned 
  • Higher reading or rises faster on thermometer A 
  • Black (surface) is a good/better emitter (than polished surface) OR polished (surface) is a poor/bad/worse emitter (than black surface)

For Heidi With Blue Hair Analysis Pointers

Sr No.Literary FeaturesAnalysis or exploration Evidence Devices and techniques
1.StructureCompromised of 5 stanzas 4 lines eachNarrativeLack of Rhyme Scheme contributes to a fluid structureInformal style overallSecond personeach stanza is like a snippet of the action unfolding thus it creates a causal link between every event Highlights the theme of freedom as there is a lack of limited expression free-flow of expression.To create the impression of having a conversation with Heidi.

2.



3.Poets Purpose In support of Hiedi standing up to the arbitrary rule/authority of the school.

4.Title the preposition makes it clear that the poem is an ode to HeidiThe modifier ‘blue hair’ underscore the main themes of the poem such as independece, unique identity etc.“For Heidi With Blue Hair”sentence stuctureGrammar
5.main themesImportance of self expression Independence RebellionDifferent Perseptions causing conflict Pain/trauma of losing a parent Societal expectations and stereotypesAdolescentsParenthoodFreedom of ChoiceStyle is not someone’s attitudeParents consensus makes it more right- not solely cause it was an individual action.Friendship and unityJustice- served by friend, independent thought to be encouraged, her act was punished more than the needed, her reason mothers death, difference in the society boxes of people. It is an extended metaphor of societal expectations

ConflictsSchool Rules VS Self Expression Social Norms VS Individual ThoughtPunishment VS JusticeAppearance VS RealityUniformity VS IndividualityConservative thinking VS Modern Thinking  



Apparent TechniquesTalking about a moment in the pastNarrative styleMotif of blue hair and then color of school coloursDehumanisation of teachersnarration of the past. Hindsight wisdom- objective view of the events. Links and creates an evaluative feel to the discussion of the consequence of events.Ode more familiar analyse the blue color chromatic image of ultramarine chose vitality and exuberant but blue is ironic as its connotations are somber and sad. Shows her duality and depth of his character. It also underscores the grief she feels over her parents death.Idea is that teachers are insignificant in the grander scheme of things and have no independent thoughts this is portrayed by the quote “teachers twittered and gave in.”


images- show the following Freedom of choice (Heidi)Images that portray her anguish of being unfairly treated Death of her mother Support of her friends




Characters: tone, motivation, actionsHeidiFatherheadmistress and teachersFriend Speaker


by Aditi Prasad

IGCSE English Literature- Past paper Questions and Guide (Essay Plan) on answering them

ESSAY PLAN OF PAST PAPER QUESTIONS by Aditi Prasad

  1. Reservist: 
    1. How does Boey Kim Cheng powerfully convey his feelings about military service in this poem?
    2. Explore the ways in which Boey uses language to memorable effect in this poem. 
  2. Becuase I Could Not Stop For Death: 
    1. Explore the ways in which Dickinson makes Because I Could Not Stop For Death such a disturbing poem.
    2. How does Dickinson vividly portray the figure of Death in Because I Could Not Stop For Death?
    3. Why does Dickenson personify Death in the the poem?
  3. For Heidi with Blue Hair: 
    1. How does Adcock’s writing make this poem both amusing and serious?
    2. How does Adcock’s writing create sympathy for Heidi in For Heidi With Blue Hair?
    3. How does Adock vividly convey the theme of teenage rebellion in the poem “Heidi with Blue Hair”
  4. The Trees Are Down: 
    1. Explore the ways in which Mew movingly writes about her feelings of loss in The Trees Are Down. 
    2. What feelings about nature does Mew’s writing convey in The Trees Are Down?
  5. One Art: 
    1. How does Bishop create a tone that is both serious and amusing in this poem?
    2. Explore in which ways Bishop uses language to have a memorable effect in the poem One Art
    3. How effectively has style and form of the villanelle been used by Elizabeth Bishop to deal with the theme of loss in the poem, “One Art”
  6. Praise Song for My Mother: 
    1. In what ways does Nichols use imagery to memorable effect in Praise Song For My Mother?
    2. How does Nichols memorably express a sense of admiration for her mother in this poem?
  7. Song: Tears, Idle Tears: 
    1. How does Tennyson powerfully convey a sense of grief in this poem?
    2. Explor.e the ways in which Tennyson creates deep feelings of sadness in this poem
  8.  Elegy For My Father’s Father: 
    1. How does Baxter use words and images to create striking effects in Elegy For My Father’s Father?
    2. How does Baxter convey a sense of admiration for his grandfather in Elegy For My Father’s Father?
    3. To what extent is this a moving poem?
  9. The Trees: 
    1. Explore the ways in which Larkin creates a feeling of hope in this poem
    2. How does Larkin strikingly convey feelings of uncertainty in this poem?
  10.  Anthem for Doomed Youth: 
    1. In what ways does Owen convey powerful emotions in Anthem For Doomed Youth?
    2. How does Owen powerfully communicate feelings about war in Anthem for Doomed Youth?
    3. How does the speaker voice his dissaporval of public funreal in the poem.
  11. Cold In the Earth: 
    1. Explore the ways in which Brontë vividly expresses her thoughts and feelings (of grief) in Cold In The Earth.
    2. How does Br ontë’s writing make the memories described in this poem so moving?
  12. Attack: 
    1. How does Sassoon create a profound feeling of anger in this poem?
    2. How does Sassoon vividly depict his experience of war in Attack?
    3. How does the poet convey the horror of warfare in the poem
  13. My Parents:
    1. What striking impressions of the speaker does Spender create for you in My Parents?
    2. Explore how Spender conveys his feelings about his childhood in this poem
    3. How doe Spender convey a powerful experience in the poem?
  14. Friend:
    1. In what ways does Tuwhare vividly convey the speaker’s memories in this poem?
    2. How does the poet create an emotive potrayal of childhood in the poem?
  15. Meeting at Night:
    1. How does Browning memorably portray the longing for his beloved?
    2. How does Browning vividly communicate a sense of excitement in Meeting At Night  ?

Meeting at Night: 

How does Browning use nature imagery to memorably portray the longing for his beloved?

I
The grey sea and the long black land;
And the yellow half-moon large and low;
And the startled little waves that leap
In fiery ringlets from their sleep,
As I gain the cove with pushing prow,
And quench its speed i’ the slushy sand.

II
Then a mile of warm sea-scented beach;
Three fields to cross till a farm appears;
A tap at the pane, the quick sharp scratch
And blue spurt of a lighted match,
And a voice less loud, thro’ its joys and fears,
Than the two hearts beating each to each!

Topic sentences:

  • The poet uses portray the lovers passion and exuberance to unite with his lover using symbolic chromatic images.
    • Little waves that leap
    • Fiery ringlets 
    • Pushing prow
    • Quench its speed
    • Blue spurt of a lighted candle 
    • Two hearts beating each to each
  • The illicit nature of the meeting underscored by the dim visual imagery highlights the fervent pursuit to meet his beloved
    • Long black island 
    • Yellow half moon large and Low – well into the night 
    • Blue spurt of a lighted candle – contrast of that flickering small light to the moon bring out secrecy 
  • The elaborate description of the lovers Long journey through the elements to snag a few precious moments with his love portray his passion.
    • Grey sea – Color connotes mystery and hardship 
    • Mile of sea-scented beach – the distance doesn’t bother him to much as he is fixated on meeting his lover.
    • Three fields – specifying – expexgesis 
  • The nature images are used as metaphors for the body of his beloved, depicting his longer for her as he gets closer
    • Warm sea scented beach
    • Quench its speed
    • Pushing prow
    • Slushy sand 

Praise Song For My Mother:

You were
water to me
deep and bold and fathoming

You were
moon’s eye to me
pull and grained and mantling

You were
sunrise to me
rise and warm and streaming

You were
the fishes red gill to me
the flame tree’s spread to me
the crab’s leg/the fried plantain smell
                              replenishing replenishing 

Go to your wide futures, you said

(Grace Nichols )

 Q.In what ways does Nichols use imagery to memorable effect in Praise Song For My Mother ?

Topic Sentences:

  • The poet uses nature epithets to symbolise and praise certain aspect of the mother’s personality, which arouses a lasting awe over the mother.
    • Water to me – life-giving, essential in her life for her upbringing and nourishment.
    • Moon’s eye to me – watchful and protective of her child, also the phrase connotes a deeps sense of elegance and beauty to the mother
    • sunrise to me – Passionate for life, the phrase also symbolises goodness, and hope, positivity and purity
    • Fishes red gill – this phrase combines the cool connotations of the sea by the fish and the vitality of the mother through the chromatic red image.
    • Flame tree – like the tree the mother offers shade and protection to poet, the word flame also carries heavy connoations of the mothers passion and energy while she was alive.
    • the crab’s leg/the fried plantain smell – the olfactory image is striking and unique. The complexity of this image expresses how special the mother was, and again how she was lifegiving by being metaphorically compared to being as important as food for the poet.
  • There are many cool and serene images and then there are powerful and messianic images – the contrast highlights the duality of the mother giving her character more depth and making her unforgettable.
    • deep and bold and fathoming
      • depth – deep personality
      •  Bold – vitality andasertive nature
      • Fathiming – understanding, compassionate and also highlights the trong physical stature of the mother
    • pull and grained and mantling
      • Pulling, magnetic personality
      • Mantling – her love is encompassing 
    • rise and warm and streaming
      • Excudes love and care
      • Streaming creates a glorious image of the mother

Friend 

Do you remember

that wild stretch of land

with the lone tree guarding the point

from the sharp-tongued sea?

The fort we built out of branches

wrenched from the tree, is dead wood now.

The air that was thick with the whirr of

toetoe spears succumbs at last to the grey gull’s wheel.

Oyster-studded roots

of the mangrove yield no finer feast

of silver-bellied eels, and sea-snails

cooked in a rusty can

Allow me to mend the broken ends

of shared days:

but I wanted to say

that the tree we climbed

that gave food and drink

to youthful dreams, is no more.

Pursed to the lips her fine-edged

leaves made whistle – now stamp

no silken tracery on the cracked

clay floor.

Friend,

in this drear

dreamless time I clasp

your hand if only for reassurance

that all our jewelled fantasies were

real and wore splendid rags.

Perhaps the tree

will strike root again:

give soothing shade to a hurt and

troubled world.

How does the poet create an emotive potrayal of childhood in the poem?

Topic Sentenses:

  • The poets nostalgic tone brings out the emotinal significance and important of this period in his life.
    • Do you remember?
    • The fort we built
    • Is no more
  • The poet describes it to be a time before he was then burdened by the difficulties of life, this longing heightens the other feelings of loss and pain from losing ones hildhood haven.
    • lone tree guarding the point from the sharp-tongued sea – the sea was adulthood and the cruel harsh world // or just represenatative of the struggles and roughness in their friendhsip to come
    • Jewelled fantasies
    • Soothing shade to a troubled world
  • By contrasting the tree he remmebered in his childhood to what had become of it now, hihglihts what he had lost and sheds sentimental value to the tree and thus his childhood.
    • The “branches” are “dead wood now”
    • The air had now “succumbs at last to the grey gull’s wheel’
    • “Fine-edged leaves made whistle – now stamp no silken tracery on the cracked clay floor.” – they tree cannot shed as the tree simply is no more.
    • “Maybe itll strike roots again” – he is hopeful
  • By romanticizing that period of time it expresses the deep emotionally fuelled longing about the tree of his boyhood.
    • Oyster-studded roots of the mangrove yield no finer feast
    • cooked in a rusty can
    • silken tracery
    • Splendid rags
    • Jewelled fantasies
    • Soothe to a troubled world
  • His childhood is manifested in the person he shared it with as well. Upon realising this he becomes desperate to become intimate again with his childhood associate upon loss of the physical symbol of his childhood, the tree. The lines highlight his longing to still keep reminders of childhood show the emotional importance of this period to him
    • I clasp your hand
    • Allow me to mend

How is pity evoked for the poet in this poem?

The poem is centred around the cutting down and destruction of the tree from the poets childhoood. But his childhood was “shared” with someone else as well, thus the poem symbolically shows that the bond to between the childhood friend has detoriated as well. This evokes pity for the nostalgic and  poet as he is losing key parts of his chilldhood, both in a physcial sense with the tree and in the abstract sense in memory of those happy times.

Song: Tears, Idle Tears: 

Tears, idle tears, I know not what they mean,

Tears from the depth of some divine despair

Rise in the heart, and gather in the eyes,

In looking on the happy autumn-fields,

And thinking of the days that are no more.

   Fresh as the first beam glittering on a sail,

That brings our friends up from the underworld,

Sad as the last which reddens over one

That sinks with all we love below the verge;

So sad, so fresh, the days that are no more.

   Ah, sad and strange as in dark summer dawns

The earliest pipe of half-awakened birds

To dying ears, when unto dying eyes

The casement slowly grows a glimmering square;

So sad, so strange, the days that are no more.

   Dear as remembered kisses after death,

And sweet as those by hopeless fancy feigned

On lips that are for others; deep as love,

Deep as first love, and wild with all regret;

O Death in Life, the days that are no more!

How does Tennyson powerfully convey a sense of grief in this poem?

Thesis:Tennyson mourn the time and experiences he will never get back which brings out the futility of life. This creates the tone and arouses feelings of sadness, dejection and grief.

  • He doesnt understand the source of his existential saddness but paradoxially he compares it to several things to express the extent of his despondency thus effectively conveying a sense of grief.

    Attack:

    Q. How does Sassoon create a profound feeling of anger in this poem?

    Topic sentences:

    1. Sassoon creates a profound feeling of anger by erasing the individual entity of the soldiers, instead referring to them as simply in unit. This dehumanises and lessens their worth. Their deaths are commodities of war not human lives lost. 
    2. The meaningless of the war and thus the loss of the lives is highlighted by the monosyllabic words, arousing anger for the suffering.
      1. Blank 
      2. Busy
    3. Anger is evoked in readers by the poet portraying how the physical and emotional burden they shoulder on the battle field. 
    4. The ecphonesis in the last line arouses sympathy as it encompasses all the suffering soldiers thoughts. 
      1. Oh Jesus make it stop

    How does the poet convey the horror of warfare in the poem.

    Topic sentences:

    1. The poet uses depressing chromatic imagery to highlight the meaninglessness and dread the soldiers feel on the battlefield 
      1. At dawn …. Massed and dun – depressing Color evokes dread and mystery. Sunrise is connoted normally as hopeful but here the soldiers regret it as they are now forced to confront the enemies
      2. Wild purple – fear of unknown and the violence to occur.
    2. Horror of war is emphasised by the usage of sibilance, for describing the burning, hopeless battle field
      1. Smouldering through spouts of drifting smoke that shroud – visual – auditory sound of burning embers – also metaphor – entire field is shrouded, destined to die. Horror of war is that you really never know if you will make it out alive.
    3. The portrayal of the shaken, scared and disoriented soldiers highlight the horrifying and pitiful effect of warfare in war.
      1. Muttering faces
      2. Clumsily bowed
      3. Jostle
      4. Furtive eyes
      5. Flounders
    4. Considering that this poem was written during the First World War, the horror of warfare is greatly accentuated due to the fact that in this time period war was often romantisiced. The poem challenged the common gung-ho of war by portraying the truth thus this conveys the real horrors faced by actual soldiers on field
    5. By personifying the landscape and tank it symbolically represents the physical trauma on the soldiers which elicits horror.

    For Heidi with Blue Hair:

    When you dyed your hair blue

    (or, at least ultramarine

    for the clipped sides, with a crest

    of jet-black spikes on top)

    you were sent home from school

    because, as the headmistress put it,

    although dyed hair was not 

    specifically forbidden, yours

    was, apart from anything else,

    not done in the school colours.

    Tears in the kitchen, telephone calls

    to school from your freedom-loving father:

    “She’s not a punk in her behaviour;

    it’s just a style.” (You wiped your eyes,

    also not in a school colour.)

    “She discussed it with me first – 

    we checked the rules.” “And anyway, Dad,

    it cost twenty-five dollars.

    Tell them it won’t wash out – 

    not even if I wanted to try.

    It would have been unfair to mention

    your mother’s death, but that

    shimmered behind the arguments.

    The school had nothing else against you;

    the teachers twittered and gave in.

    Next day your black friend had hers done

    in grey, white and flaxen yellow –

    the school colours precisely:

    an act of solidarity, a witty

    tease. The battle was already won.

    How does Adcock’s writing create sympathy for Heidi in For Heidi With Blue Hair?

    IGCSE English Language Complete Guide

    Language Revision Pointers  by Aditi Prasad

    Two papers

    • Paper 2
    • Paper 3 

    PAPER 2

    • Directed writing

    -Newspaper/ Magazine article

    -Journal

    -Dialogue writing

    -Interview

    -Article 

    -Report based of article

    -Letter writing

    -Diary Entry

    -Talk

    Pointers

    • For Directed Writing, 
    • Be sure to follow the pointers. It is important to find at least 5 points per pointer. 
    • Usually the last one is most difficult so be wary and think of the pointers before you start. 
    • If its persuasive writing convert each pointer into a question.
    • Marks are awarded now according to the developing of the points, what a certain phrase in the article could be implying/suggesting. It is a MUST for it to be included. Plus its effect/ consequences/ implies/ suggests
    • Have the appropriate and a consistent voice/tone/style. 
    • Think about your vocabulary choice. 
    • Maintain NEATNESS of your answer. Top reason you lose a mark or two for the marking criteria is due to the examiner finding the answer awkward due to the messy handwriting.
    • For How Writers Achieve Effects, 
    • read the question and underline important terms or phrases such as the number of images to pick out. 
    • Then remember one must pick out IMAGES this includes- 
    • Kinesthetic. Movement.
    • Olfactory. Smell.
    • Visual. Sight.
    • Gustatory. Taste.
    • Organic. Feeling inside.
    • Tactile. Touch.
    • Auditory. Sound.
    • Personification
    • Alliteration
    • Metaphor
    • Simile (like, as)
    • Transferred Epithet
    • Non vocabulary choices- punctuation or sentence structure BUT with explanation of the vocabulary, supported
    • Overview giving the overall effect of the paragraph leave two lines and fill in later
    • On Answering you must give the LITERAL meaning (dictionary definition) then give the effect arising in the reader by the support of the imagery. 
    • “The phrase literally/connotated/tion)/indication/denotation is  /taken /understood /considered /means …… and its effect /impact /reaction /suggestion / …… . And/This is further highlighted/ drawn attention to/ amplified/ magnified/ intensified/ augmented by the use of so and so device/imagery”  OR

     “The use of so and so device/imagery has ..so..and..so..  Effect, which is amplified/ magnified/ intensified/ augmented  by the device due to ….. (Though the literal meaning of the phrase … )“

    • FOLLOW EXACTLY THE MARKING SCHEME ISTG
    •  They “Expect responses to provide words (listed in the mark scheme) that carry connotations additional to general meaning.”
    • For summary,
    • Mark out 15 points- ALL FACTS 
    • Must be relevant
    • Highlight keywords in the question
    • Quality of writing – concise, below word limit
    • Focused answers
    • Written in your own words
    • NO REDUNDANT STATEMENTS OF CONCLUSION OR INTRODUCTION
    • No need for persuasive text ONLY FACTUAL
    • Repetition is a no no
    • Copying words – lose 2 marks
    • “Furthermore, additionally, also, nonetheless, nevertheless, in contrast, thus, moreover, besides,”
    • “The response is well focused on the passage and the question. All points are expressed clearly, concisely and fluently, and in the candidate’s own words (where appropriate) throughout. “

    Paper 2 

    Reading Passages (Extended) 2 hours, 50 marks 

    Candidates answer three questions on two passages which may be on a similar topic. 

    Passage A will be 650–750 words

    Passage B will be 550–650 words in length. 

    Recommended: Candidates should spend approximately 15 minutes reading the passages. 

    Question 1 Extended response (20 marks) 

    This question, in response to Passage A, may be sub-divided. 

    Candidates write about 250–350 words

    Responding in one of the following text types: letter, report, journal, speech, interview, newspaper report or magazine article. 

    This question tests the following reading assessment objectives (15 marks): 

    1. Demonstrate understanding of explicit meanings – 5 Marks
    2. Demonstrate understanding of implicit meanings and attitudes – 5 Marks
    3. Analyse, evaluate and develop facts, ideas and opinions. – 5 Marks

    The question also tests the following writing assessment objectives (5 marks): 

    1. Articulate experience and express what is thought, felt and imagined – 2 Marks
    2. Sequence facts, ideas and opinions – 1 Mark
    3. Use a range of appropriate vocabulary – 1 Mark
    4. Use register appropriate to audience and context. – 1 Mark

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    Question 2 Language question (10 marks) 

    This question, in response to Passage A, may be sub-divided. 

    Candidates write about 200–300 words. 

    This question tests the following reading assessment objective (10 marks): 

    1. Demonstrate understanding of how writers achieve effects. 

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    Question 3 Summary question (20 marks) 

    This question in response to Passage B may be sub-divided. 

    Candidates write their content points in note form and then their summary as continuous writing of 200–250 words. 

    This question tests the following reading assessment objectives (15 marks): 

    1. Demonstrate understanding of explicit meanings – 3 Marks
    2. Demonstrate understanding of implicit meanings and attitudes – 5 Marks
    3. Select for specific purposes. – 7 Marks

    The question also tests the following writing assessment objectives (5 marks): 

    1. Articulate experience and express what is thought, felt and imagined – 2 Marks
    2. Sequence facts, ideas and opinions – 2 Marks
    3. Use a range of appropriate vocabulary – 1 Mark

    PAPER 3

    Directed Writing:

    • Clear, persuasive text
    • “Consistent sense of audience; authoritative and appropriate style. Fluent, varied sentences; wide range of vocabulary. Strong sense of structure, paragraphing and sequence. Spelling, punctuation and grammar almost always accurate.”
    •  understanding by developing much of the reading material and assimilating it into a response to the task.

    Out of 25, 10 are for contents are free marks.  Develeoping answers – is TF thoughts and feelings of the people in the extract.  

    TECHNIQUE TO GET HIGHER MARKS AND SHOW OF HOLD OF LANGUAGE

    • Start sentence in different ways.
    •  Complex sentences- commas and exclamation 
    • Start with verbs, adverbs
    • Appropriate vocabulary
    • And planning good god remember to plan

    Structure of answer

    -bullet point 1- baackgroud, general information

    -Positive in relation to point 2

    -Negative in relation to point 2

    Persuasive writing- rhetoric, Use the headings or points as questions

    PERSUASIVE WRITING TECHNIQUES:

    • Appeals
    •  Evidence argument as more logical or reliable. Statistics, expert opinions, research findings and anecdotal evidence. 
    • Attacks: Attacks on opposing views. Using humor to make fun of these views can be particularly persuasive. 
    • Inclusive and exclusive Language: Inclusive language such as ‘we’,’our,,,us, and exclusive language such as ‘them’ can persuade by including the reader, or by creating a sense of solidarity or a sense of responsibility. ‘People like you and me don’t want to see this happen’ 
    • Rhetorical Questions: Rhetorical questions are questions that do not require and answer and are asked for effect only. 
    • Cause and effect: arguments may claim there is a cause and effect relationship when really there is just a relationship and other factors should be considered. 
    • Connotations: The connotation is the emotional meaning associated with the word. Persuasive authors often choose their words carefully so that the connotation suits their purpose. ‘Kill’ and ‘Slaughter’ both mean the same thing, but the word ‘slaughter’ has a different connotation to ‘kill’, as it causes the audience to imagine that the act was particularly horrific. 
    • Analogy: Analogy is a form of reasoning which compares one thing with another in order to make a particular point.
    • Generalisations: Make sweeping statements about a whole group, based on only one or two members of that group. These can be persuasive if the audience believes the generalization is appropriate
    • Humor: Humor, such as puns, irony, sarcasm, satire and jokes can be persuasive by dismissing opposing views, providing a more engaging and friendly tone, and sway an audience by having them enter into the joke. 
    • Jargon: By using specialised terms, the author can persuade the audience that they are an expert.
    • Formal Language: Formal language can make the author sound knowledgeable while removing emotion from the issue. This can make the argument sound reasonable and rational, and the contention seem balanced
    • Colloquial language: Colloquial language is informal, everyday, conversational language that includes down to earth views and is seductive because it appears friendly, and can make the audience feel that the author is on the same wavelength as them.
    • Repetition: By repeating letters, words and phrases the author can reinforce an argument and ensure that the point of view being made stays in an audience’s mind
    • Hyperbole: The use of hyperbole emphasizes points by exaggerating. lt can be used to mock opposing opinions, as a shock tactics technique, or an appeal to fears. 
    • Alliteration and Assonance: The repetition of initial consonant sounds {alliteration) or vowel sounds (assonance) adds emphasis to major points and makes them more memorable. 
    • lmagery and Figurative Language: use of figurative language, metaphor and simile can paint a word picture for audience, making the point visually and by comparison, or appeal to emotions.
    • Images

    Descriptive 

    • No story
    • Simile, metaphor, alliteration
    • Impression of reality
    • Develop ideas and varieties 
    • Vary perspective/focus with the start of the phrase
    • Many well-defined and developed ideas and images create a convincing, original, overall picture with varieties of focus
    • Start sentence in a new way every time.

    Narrative 

    • Marking is going to be done on:
    • Structure: How the essay begins and how it ends
    • Style: Diction, creating and maintenance of tone and atmosphere
    • Realistic story
    • Structured answer
    • NO CLIFFHANGER
    • Atmosphere maintained- suspense, gloom, anger, joy
    • Spider Diagram- eliminate and get the fun to write/surprising the examiner
    • Think which story will fit in 2 pages 
    • Eliminate the story according to which will have the least effect on the on reader
    • Decide on a tense and then stick to it; do not jump between present and past. The normal narrative tense is past and those who try to write in the present usually forget to do so after a while, so it is safer to start off in the past. 
    • Know what your last sentence is going to be before you write your fi rst. A narrative has to build up to a climax and lead towards a conclusion which is planned before it starts or it will end lamely or incomprehensibly, or the pace will be too slow or too fast. 
    • Don’t try to do too much; you can’t cover many events and many years in one short composition. Select key moments and skip over the rest, changing the pace according to the intensity of the moment. 
    • Don’t try to include too many characters (generally no more than than three is best). Don’t try to give them all speech. 
    • For the top band, complexity of narrative and structure is required e.g. framing the story; fl ashback or forward time jump; two parallel strands being brought together. However, do not attempt these devices unless you are sure you can manage them. 
    • Use dialogue by all means (if you can punctuate and set it out correctly) but don’t overdo it. You shouldn’t turn your story into a play, nor should you dilute the effect of occasional and signifi cant moments of speech by giving the characters trivial things to say throughout. Save speech for important moments. 
    • If you do use dialogue, fi nd synonyms for ‘he said/she said’. 
    • Even narrative needs description. You need to help your reader imagine characters and places by adding signifi cant details to bring them alive. 
    • Choose to tell your narrative in fi rst or third person and stick with your choice; do not switch viewpoint accidentally, as this is confusing for the reader. 
    • Don’t use a fi rst person narrator if you want to die at the end of your story! It is generally safer to use third person narration as it gives you more fl exibility and a wider viewpoint. 
    • Don’t end your story with ‘And then I woke up in hospital’, or ‘It was all a dream’. Try to avoid clichés of any kind, including stereotypical characters and predictable outcomes. 
    • Use similes, but avoid obvious ones such as ‘as red as a rose’. Make comparisons unusual, but still apt, by giving them a moment’s thought and making them more specifi c e.g. ‘as red as a matador’s cape’. 
    • Use plenty of interesting details to engage your reader and make them want to read on. 
    • Don’t exaggerate; too much blood or too many unlikely events become ridiculous, and fear is more believable when it is mental rather than physical. 
    • Use your own knowledge and experiences as inspiration. It is better to think of something that actually happened to you, or someone you know, or which you read in a book or saw in a fi lm, than to try to make up something entirely from scratch. It will sound more convincing. You will need to adapt, embellish and exaggerate the original idea to make it relevant, fresh and memorable – just retelling the plot synopsis or giving a factual account is not likely to interest your reader. 
    • START WITH THE CRISIS- Thus dramatic start/language/tone enticing reader 
    • Motive and background exposed in the exposition
    • Short paragraphs
    • Detailed lines to give the exposition
    • Give feelings to characters to engage the readers

    LAST MINUTE NOTES READING

    Directed Writing 

    • Marks awarded for DENOTATION and DEVELOPING. 
      • DENOTATION – Straightforward Point – DEVELOPING – Implying what, contrasting to what, implicating that, highlighting that, leading to,
      • 5 POINTS EACH
      • Good words, posh
      • Sequence answer correctly

    How writers achieve effects

    • On Answering you must give the LITERAL meaning (dictionary definition) then give the EFFECT arising in the reader by the support of the imagery. 
    • Just describe image in other words, offer connotation followed by the effect of the phrase on readers
    • “The phrase literally/connotated/tion)/indication/denotation is  /taken /understood /considered /means …… and its effect /impact /reaction /suggestion / …… . And/This is further highlighted/ drawn attention to/ amplified/ magnified/ intensified/ augmented by the use of so and so device/imagery”  OR
    •  “The use of so and so device/imagery has ..so..and..so..  Effect, which is amplified/ magnified/ intensified/ augmented  by the device due to ….. (Though the literal meaning of the phrase … )“

    Summary

    • Take facts only
    • At Least 15
    • Use connectives – And, furthermore, moreover, additionally, also, as well as, besides, another, subsequently, accordingly, or,

    IGCSE Chemistry Paper 6 Notes

    CHEMISTRY IGCSE REVISION by Aditi Prasad

    How to add salt to an acid in a basic Acid+Insoluble Base reaction?

    1. Spatula

    Why is heat not required sometimes in a  Acid+Insoluble Base reaction?

    1. Reaction is fast enough at room temperature

    Define ‘in excess’

    • unreacted
    • still solid
    • insoluble

    How to form crystals from an aquoues solution of a salt?

    • fiilter out unreactant excess
    • heat or evaporate till saturated 
    • to crystallisation point or until saturation point to conduct the glass rod test

    Errors in titration process

    1. using a measuring cylinder to measure solution 
    2. only carrying out the experiments once 
    3. going past the end-point  

    How to avoid errors

    1. repeat the experiment 
    2. improvement linked to going past the end-point – be vigilant and register changes in solution
    3. change in apparatus or method 
      1. e.g. use a pipette / burette 
      2. use insulation / lid  
      3. as more accurate / precise, than a measuring cylinder. 
    4. Reduce heat losses – polyseterene cup 

    Describe a flame test

    • blue /roaring/ hot flame 
    • use of a splint /wire to introduce the solid into the flame 
    • use of (concentrated) hydrochloric acid to wash the wire initially

    Why is it necesary to gently heat the solid in tube at first?

    1. solid spits out of the tube / the tube might crack 

    Define Solubility

    1. This is the maximum amount of solute a solvent can hold/dissolve at a given temperature.

    Obtaining pure water from a mixture:

    • Heat/boil mixture
    • condnse the vapor

    Obtaining sand from a mixture:

    • filter/decant after dissolving soluble substance into water
    • Clean with water
    • dry 

    Color of salts in solid form:

    What is the purpose of the water above?

    • Condense the vapours 
    • from gaseous to liquid state

    Why is thermometer bulb placed as shown and not in the mixture of alcohols?

    1. to measure the temperature of the vapour/ temperature of liquid would not be constant 

    Give an advantage and disadvantage of using a measuring cylinders?

    Adv- Quick and easy to use

    Disadv- not accurate 

    Ways to improve a reaction

    • use of burette 
    • pipette 
    • gas syringe 
    • weighed amount of limting reagent 
    • repeat experiment (and average)
    • clean the reactant/remove oxide layer

    When a solid substance has no obvious cation we have learned it is:

    -probably a transition metal compound

    – is an catylat for the other reactions that occured

    Describe how you would  
    ● obtain a sample of tin from a large lump of cassiterite in the laboratory,  
    ● determine the percentage by mass of tin present in cassiterite. 
    Tin is similar in reactivity to iron. (Cassiterite is a naturally occurring form of tin oxide.)
    Your answer should include any apparatus and chemicals used and the conditions required:

    A:  • crush lumps with pestle and mortar 

    • weigh cassiterite 

    • heat /reduce 

    • with carbon /CO/ more reactive metal, e.g. Zn 

    • weigh tin 

    • (mass of tin/ initial mass) × 100 (%) 

    How would results be improved by taking repeated measurements?

    1. can take average or mean / can spot anomalies /more reliable 

    Name a suitable indicator that could be used in titration

    1. methyl orange / thymolphthalein / litmus 
    Potassium chloride is a salt that dissolves in water. The solubility of a salt is the mass in grams of the salt that dissolves in 100 cm3 of water at a particular temperature. 
    Plan an investigation to determine the solubility of potassium chloride in water at 40 °C. You are provided with potassium chloride and common laboratory apparatus.
    • Method 1: evaporation 

    • measured volume of water using measuring cylinder / pipette / burette 

    • heat to 40 °C / heat to >40 °C 

    • add KCl until no more dissolves / add excess KCl 

    • stir 

    • filter mixture (if heated to >40 °C then need to cool and filter) 

    • evaporate filtrate to dryness 

    • weigh solid 

    • Method 2 mass not used 

    • measured volume of water using measuring cylinder / pipette / burette 

    • heat to 40 °C 

    • add KCl until no more dissolves 

    • stir 

    • weigh KCl not added 

    • weigh KCl before adding any to water – only awarded if weighed mass not used after 

    • difference in mass of KCl is mass dissolved 

    • Method 3 mass undissolved

     • measured volume of water

     • using measuring cylinder / pipette / burette 

    • heat to 40 °C 

    • stir 

    • filter 

    • weigh residue (do not award if residue washed) 

    • add weighed (excess) KCl to water – only awarded if mass of residue measured • mass KCl dissolved = initial mass – final mass 

    Describe a test for carbon dioxide. 

    • limewater / calcium hydroxide solution 
    • Turns milky / cloudy / white ppt. 

    Suggest how the reliability of the results could be checked.

    1. Repeating experiment and comparing/taking average

    What is this process?

    • evaporate; 

    • until crystallisation point/ crystals (start to) form/ saturated; 

    • leave to cool; 

    Suggest one advantage of putting a layer of chromium on a spoon.

    1. prevent rusting/ corrosion/attractive appearance/ shiny; 

    Why must the electrolysing object be very clean and free of grease?

    1. coating will not stick / be even / dirt or grease will be trapped; 

    Why was the burette washed with- (i) Distilled water, (ii) Acid to be added

    (i) to remove intial liquid/residue/ impurities / to clean it; 

    (ii) to remove water/ so acid is not diluted; 

    If the composition of a salt is not clear just mention general observations like:

    hydrated/water; 

    Acidic

    Basic

    Anhydrous Copper Sulphate + Water

    Exothermic – temperature increase

    Color change – white to blue 

    Cobalt Chloride + Water

    Endothermic – heat is applied for color change

    Color change – from pink to blue 

    Dilute sulfuric acid reacts rapidly with magnesium ribbon. The magnesium ribbon gets smaller and eventually disappears. 

    Plan an investigation to show how the rate of this reaction changes using different concentrations of sulfuric acid. You are provided with common laboratory apparatus, sulfuric acid, water and magnesium ribbon.

    • uses different (at least two) concentrations of sulfuric acid;  
    • made by diluting with water; 
    • same total volume of (diluted) sulfuric acid; 
    • same mass / amount/ size/ length/ surface area of magnesium (ribbon); 
    • measure time (or run at the same time); 
    • for magnesium to dissolve or react or disappear/ cm3 gas to collect/ volume collected (set time)/ bubbles to stop/ mass to decrease by g/mass to stop decreasing; 
    • compare times of reaction/results; 

    “Using a measuring cylinder, 30 cm3 of aqueous sulfuric was poured into a beaker. The stop clock was started and a 4 cm length of magnesium was added to the sulfuric acid in the beaker. The mixture was stirred constantly. The time taken for all of the magnesium to react and disappear was measured.”

    Indicator Types

    • Universal indicator.
    • Litmus.
    • Phenolphthalein.
    • Methyl orange.

    Anamolous in titration reactions caused by:

    • measuring or recording error 
    • manual error with burette
    • overshot end-point

    What could have been used to apply a mixture onto the paper in chromotagraphy?

    1. (teat) pipette/ capillary tube; 

    Possible solvent that could be used for paper chromotagraphy

    1. water/ organic solvent;

    Why does sometimes the mixture on the baseline in paper chromotagraphy not move?

    Compound is insoluble in given solvent

    Why does increased temperature increase rate of reaction?

    • particles have more energy / move faster; 
    • more (chance of/ successful) collisions; 

    Explain why cotton wool was used in the neck of the conical flask

    • to prevent escape of/ splash of acid;
    • to allow carbon dioxide/ gas to escape; 

    You are provided with samples of three metals, tin, zinc and silver. Plan an investigation to show the order of reactivity of these three metals. You are provided with common laboratory apparatus and dilute acids.

    • Method 1: 
      • Monitoring the reaction of the metal with acid 
      • named acid; 
      • same or stated volume of (same concentration of) acid; 
      • fair test idea, i.e. same surface area/ size/ mass / amount metal; 
      • measure volume of gas / count bubbles / temperature change/ observe complete reaction; 
      • suitable reference to time; 
      • conclusion/ comparison, e.g. most effervescence = most reactive; 
    • Method 2: 
      • Displacement reaction from: 
      • react each metal;  
      • with named acid;
      • to prepare salt solution of each; 
      • react each metal with each solution of salt; observe if displacement occurs; 
      • conclusion/ comparison; 

    Suggest what could be used to hang the piece of limestone from the stand over the heat. Explain your answer.

    1. Wire – with high melting point

    In what position should the air hole of the Bunsen burner be?

    1. Open

    Inert Electrodes

    • Platinum
    • Graphite(carbon) 
    • Gold
    • Rhodium 

    Reactive (or involved) Electrodes

    • Copper 
    • Zinc
    • Lead 
    • Silver

    Explain why electrolysis of concentrated hydrochloric acid experiment is carried out in a fume cupboard.

    • chlorine produced; 
    • poisonous /toxic; 

    What type of chemical reaction occurred when magnesium reacted with sulfuric acid? 

    1. exothermic / redox / displacement  

     An oxidising agent was added  iron(II) chloride solution. Aqueous sodium hydroxide was then added to the mixture.

    1. Brown Precipitate
    Toothbright toothpaste contains three compounds, sodium fluoride, calcium carbonate and water. Calcium carbonate is insoluble in water and sodium fl uoride is soluble in water. 
    Plan an investigation to fi nd out the percentage of calcium carbonate present in this toothpaste. You are provided with common laboratory apparatus.
    • weighed amount/ xg of toothpaste
    • add water; 
    • stir/ heat; 
    • filter (to obtain calcium carbonate)
    • Wash
    • dry 
    • weigh residue
    • calculate percentage calcium carbonate;  Mass of Calcium Carbonate/Mass of Toothpaste X 100

    A solution of dilute sulfuric acid was electrolysed for 1 hour. Suggest why the pH of the solution decreased during the electrolysis

    • solution became more acidic / more concentrated 
    • water was broken down/ electrolysed 
    1. measure initial temperature of (solid) ammonium chloride / barium hydroxide 
    2. add barium hydroxide / ammonium chloride AND mix / stir
    3. use a thermometer
    4. measure the temperature of the mixture / final temperature
    5. temperature decreases /test-tube feels cold

    Test for Ammonia

    Ammonium ions can be identified in a solution by adding dilute sodium hydroxide solution and gently heating. If ammonium ions are present, they will be converted to ammonia gas. The gas will turn red litmus paper blue.

    How would you know when to stop heating a solution in an evaporating dish?

    • solid/ crystals appearing on edge
    • glass rod test;  

    What if there is no reaction when testing something?

    • no reaction/ change/ precipitate
    The label on a bottle of orange drink stated ‘contains no artificial colours’. A scientist thought that the orange colour in the drink was a mixture of two artificial colours: • Sunset Yellow E110 • Allura Red E129 
    Plan an investigation to show that the orange colour in the drink did not contain these two artificial colours. You are provided with samples of E110, E129 and the orange colouring from the drink. You are also provided with common laboratory apparatus. You may draw a diagram to help answer the question.
    • chromatography; 
    • (pencil) baseline/ origin; 
    • apply orange colour to paper; 
    • and samples of both E110 and E129; 
    • solvent/ named solvent; 
    • check heights of spots of E colours against orange drink; 
    • conclusion/ allow comparison to known Rf values; 

    Suggest why small glass beads are used in the fractionating column instead of large glass beads.

    1. Larger surface area of overreactive higher boiling point liquids to condense and fall back into the flask to liquid.

     Give a test to show that a liquid is acidic.

    1. named indicator/ pH meter/ pH paper 
    2. result: correct colour change/ pH < 7 (1) 

    The gas given off was tested with damp litmus paper (2 marks)

    • indicator paper turns blue 
    • pungent/ sharp smell

    Ethanedioic acid dihydrate, H2C2O4.2H2O, is a white crystalline solid. This acid is water-soluble and is found in rhubarb leaves. Plan an investigation to obtain crystals of ethanedioic acid dihydrate from some rhubarb leaves. You are provided with common laboratory apparatus, water and sand. 

    • extraction 
    • cut leaves up/ small pieces / grind/ crush
    • use of pestle/ mortar 
    • add water 
    • sand 
    • boil/ heat/ stir/ mix / shake 
    • separation decant/ filter
    • obtaining crystals evaporate/ heat solution 
    • to crystallising point/until crystals start to form 
    • leave to cool 
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